Caesar

the problem with deliberate madness is that not only it doesn't make sense, but it doesn't make sense in a way that doesn't intrigue my senses. If that makes sense ...

keep me posted pls

This needs black metal riffing.

Previous username.

Same goes for you. Take my - and the other's - opinions in consideration, instead of blowing us off. Otherwise, you'll never improve.

Dedicate another poem to that pls

My pleasure.

No, she is YWS' Supreme Grammar Nazi. In a good way of course

Apparently not quite impeccable grammar, hahaha

Ah, perhaps it was your intention. Mine was to try and help you salvage that thing above *waves in general direction at piece*

You imply I reviewed this solely to get points. Yet you talk about insulting.

THERE'S A HOOKER. FORGET WHAT I SAID ABOUT YOUR NOVEL, TEN PLUS, BRAVA, BRAVA. But actually, it seems to me this chapter is even more useless and redundant than the ...

I call hax. I'm sure I reviewed this before.

This was originally supposed to be a brief comment on how much I liked your chapter >.> then I started rambling.