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Re: Guardianship, Prologue - The Throne (part 2)
oh I'm dumb, I completely passed over the part where you actually do tell us she creates an army of smoke. That makes /slightly/ more sense, but it still could ...
Sep 1, 2014 -
Re: Mathematical tribute to Young Writers Society.
*tips fedora* xddddddd
Aug 26, 2014 -
Re: heavy metal
no problem haha, I was joking.
Jul 20, 2014 -
Re: heavy metal
the one complaint I have is that black metal is usually more emotional than heavy metal, so the title isn't quite as appropriate as it should be *sits atop high ...
Jul 20, 2014 -
Re: Avant Garde
ROW ROW FIGHT DA POWAH also alternate title should be avant garden
Jun 28, 2014 -
Re: Sleeping Suicides (Lost Chapter)
pleasure is mine
Jun 18, 2014 -
Re: Flirtatious Glances, Secret Desires (Excerpt)
aw you actually quoted one of my reviews
Jun 17, 2014 -
Re: Five Hundred Pound Catastrophe
sir or madam same thing
Jun 14, 2014 -
Re: Five Hundred Pound Catastrophe
this is absolutely lovely, I really like the way an otherwise traumatic event is seen humorously through Terence's eyes. Even your use of adjectives made me laugh at points, 'parabolic ...
Jun 13, 2014 -
Re: 'The Necromancer's Reckoning' Chapter 1 and 2
the grammar nazi hath spoken
May 23, 2014 -
Re: The Reaper in Black -- Chapter One
I recommend giving us more to go on from the start, yeah. and sure, no problem.
May 13, 2014 -
Re: Moby Dick
in his off days, Obama reviews limericks.
May 5, 2014 - Re: Moby Dick May 5, 2014
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Re: Untitled - Intro - Breathe
//NOTBIAS
Apr 18, 2014 -
Re: Untitled - Intro - Breathe
the second version is beautiful
Apr 18, 2014