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Plus the title has already been used. Terry Pratchett, 'Eric'. Pure awesomeness.

Encouraging reviews are all well and good, yeah, but pointing out the mistakes is also good... nay, required, in a review. DNX was harsh, yeah, but at least MM now ...

Dang it the format was messed up. Oh well, you get my point, I hope :P

I apologize. There are some mistakes in the review, I think.

Though there are considerable grammatical mistakes nonwithstanding

I forgot to add, I like where this is going, the idea of vamps fighting each other, and, as Rocky pointed out in the Lounge, you do get into your ...

As a matter of fact, MM, try typing your stuff into word, then copy/paste onto YWS. That's what I did. Which is also what I did before reviewing your work, ...

Hey MM, I get DNX was harsh to you, but you were now equally harsh to him, and more so. He was trying to point out the flaws, that's all. ...

Whoa. Fail. Must edit that

I would, but the link's busted

Thanks man. Final Fantasy was my inspiration.

Thanks... I'll get on it now. Emotion was the one thing I was pretty sure I lacked

Hokay. It just wasn't that clear to me. Remember, readers aren't in your head.

Oh god. You see, I am not a poem. Thanks, though/

It shall be so