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Re: The Diamond Fist (1)
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Dec 30, 2012 -
Re: The Diamond Fist (1)
trollo
Dec 29, 2012 -
Re: The Diamond Fist (1)
trollo
Dec 29, 2012 -
Re: The Diamond Fist (1)
trollo
Dec 29, 2012 -
Re: Fallen Star
Wooo.
Dec 24, 2012 -
Re: Fallen Star
I'm depicting Satan as he sees God's hypocrisy and lies, and is cast out of Heaven for it, being imprisoned under the Earth. Meanwhile humans don't really know what he's ...
Dec 24, 2012 -
Re: Fallen Star
I'm depicting Satan as he sees God's hypocrisy and lies, and is cast out of Heaven for it, being imprisoned under the Earth. Meanwhile humans don't really know what he's ...
Dec 24, 2012 -
Re: .
Basically what I said in my last review. :P
Dec 23, 2012 -
Re: This is War (rewrite)
I know it's not literal war. I'm not THAT incapable. But continuity is good even in metaphors. ;)
Dec 17, 2012 -
Re: This is War (rewrite)
I know it's not literal war. I'm not THAT incapable. But continuity is good even in metaphors. ;)
Dec 17, 2012 -
Re: Sparks: Chapter One
Hahaha. So I was incorrect in my reviews and comment. Fair enough, fair enough. Note to self, don't review teen romance anymore.
Dec 17, 2012 -
Re: Sparks: Chapter One
O_o so the format is okay. Wiut.
Dec 17, 2012 -
Re: One Valentine Surprise
Calling someone dumb and an idiot because they didn't know some popstar or another is pretty... dumb and idiotic. ;)
Dec 16, 2012 -
Re: Sparks: Chapter One
Okay, so the piece is spaced now... I dunno about the others, but it's this indent eg She hesitates before matching my smirk, standing and holding a hand out for ...
Dec 14, 2012 -
Re: Sparks: Chapter One
Oh, wait, okay. You copy/pasted. Right. Maybe preview the work before submitting it, next time :P
Dec 14, 2012