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hey there littleauthor! Welcome to YWS. I hope you're enjoying the site. It saddens me the first thing you had to post is a One Direction fanfic. I truly hope ...

Okay, hey there amv. Perhaps you may not return to YWS, so you may not see this, nevertheless, if you do see it, here's my review. I feel like you ...

Hey. "In this story, you will find death, monsters, and if you stop reading now, sanity." Catchy, but I would have gone with 'and if you keep reading, madness.' Makes ...

Hey there Arak, I'll be reviewing your fourth chapter. Finally! Can't wait for more. To be fair, you've sort of improved. Or rather, there are less things I can critique ...

Hey again DNX. I really don't have a lot to say about this chapter. Truly, it was well-written. Not perfect nor splendid, but well-written, certainly. I especially liked your description ...

Hey there DNX, I'll be dropping the tiniest comment on your work. Now, it's been a while since I've reviewed your first chapter, so I may state something incorrect about ...

Hey there, puffletia! I'm... really not sure what this is. A Christmas story? Christmas stories are nice, though I notice this wasn't exactly posted during Christmas. However, this also lacks ...

Hey there Lulu! Welcome to YWS! I encourage you review other's pieces too, that makes people more eager to review your work. Now, overall, this wasn't so bad as a ...

HHey there HHemayed! ;) Oh look, I find myself stumbling upon a brief piece concerning morals. How very fun. However, I challenge the final statement. Wisdom ~ Never underestimate anyone, ...

Hey there TYLENOL. This was... long. Very long. And heavy, oh-so-heavy to digest. I must admit at certain points I caught myself growing drowsy, eyelids closing, brain slowly being demolished ...

Hey there ScribbleBug! Welcome to YWS, message me if you have any troubles finding your way around the site and such. Now, onto the review proper. Overall, my opinion of ...

Hey there deadman! Mmm, medieval fantasy. Nice. Lots of action-packed chapters? Very nice. Since Searria covered the grammar, I'll be focusing on other aspects, mainly the action scene, as I ...

Hi there ElJoker! Nice avvie and welcome to YWS! Anyways, onto the review. This was indeed rather short! I'm not quite sure what to say other than general opinions -- ...

Hey there rwg. This should be labeled under Fanfiction, because this is clearly a Star Wars Fanfiction. You might also want to mention that, otherwise you're risking copyright infringement and ...

Okay, finally more chapters! I agree with Pengi, show us, don't tell us. Short chapters are fine, but these are... lacking. They lack description. You really should describe what Chiron ...