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Hey there SerenyaChan! Welcome to YWS! I hope you've been having a good time here. Keep on reviewing! That's the best way to get reviews on your own stuff. Now, ...

Hey there MilesGrayson! Nice username, and welcome to YWS! I'm going to have to start out and say, this really, really sounds like a Hunger Games fanfic to me. Capitol? ...

Hi Stells! I've actually read this chapter twice — once before reading your first, then again after. Maybe I'll hop along and give that a review as well! In the ...

Hey there methrirr! I can sort of see why Draven would have you post this, instead of himself, even with your 'polishing'. This still isn't a particularly great work. There ...

Heyhowdyhey VassternichDrauka! Nice username. Now, onto the review. The way you structured this, your 'voice' was fairly good. It doesn't really suit a rigid, medieval context, however. If this is ...

Hey there AwesomeSauce! Alright, an interesting start to what is surely to be a promising novel. That scene where your character, Faith, sees the woman in the stars? Lovely. I ...

Hey BlackNether12! Welcome to YWS! Hope you're having a good time :) Okay, onto the review. Firstly, I appreciated the effort you put into describing the landscaping. At times, it ...

Hey omniyus! KotGR FANFICTION 8D //cackles Well, this as anything deserves a review! Perhaps more so. Now, this is very short for a prologue. It seems to me more like ...

Hi Josee! You should really post some more, you're looking rather ghostly >.> Anyways, onto the review. This piece needs a lot of work. Like, a lot of work. There's ...

Hey there Scar! Now I'm not sure I remember this prompt exactly. You were supposed to write about a circus without using some words Jabsy gave you, right? Was there ...

Hey Jalmoc! Wooo, Star Wars fanfiction! //cackle Dalek. Star Wars... Dalek..? Get it? Get it? No? Hm. Then I guess I ought to get to the review. Well, this short ...

Hi there! I would say welcome to YWS but you joined so long ago... welcome back to YWS, then! Now, let me start off saying I don't get the message ...

AHA. Hey there Sephiroth! Good stuff this, good stuff this. Terribly cliche, but good stuff nonetheless. I'd like to point out the ending as very cliche, in fact, I've read, ...

Hey there Scar! I know this was a flash fiction, so I won't really be criticizing the lack of description here -- takes up space which might be unnecessary, considering ...

Hey Pulchra! I'll be completely ignoring the 'Satire' bit this is labeled as, and review this completely seriously as if this was a 100% honest piece of literature on YWS. ...