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Thanks for the feedback, Kays!

Ooh, the rhyme was totally unintentional, but now you point it out, I think it really works! :D

Thanks for the feedback! I'm glad you enjoyed it :)

Thanks for the feedback! You've zoomed right in on the bit I was least certain about - those two lines in the second stanza. They were a late addition, and ...

*simultaneous review high five* Thanks for the review! Also that is an excellent gif, I must save it. I get what you mean about the opening being a bit too ...

Thanks for the feedback! I'm glad you liked it! :)

Thank you for the feedback!

You don't read stories at work, just like I don't read reviews on my story at work ;)

Thank you for the review! I'm glad you enjoyed the piece! I hope you make it through the rest of Hitchhiker's at some point - Adams is one of my ...

Beeeeckeeew! I was totally thinking about the graveyard with Greyfriars Bobby when I was writing it, so you get some inspiration credit there for showing me around it. The 3rd ...

Thanks for the feedback! The narrative style change seems to be throwing a lot of people (and here I hadn't even noticed it, haha) so I guess I need to ...

Yaay, I'm so glad you liked it! (And you liked it enough for an all-caps wallpost about it, I'm six kinds of flattered

Thanks for the feedback! Good spot about the "board of chipboard" - I changed it from MDF at the last moment and forgot to reread the sentence *facepalm*.

Zippo is a brand name! :D Thanks for the feedback!

You're welcome - glad I could help!