Cacophony

Alright, I finally caught up with this story. This part's pretty good :). (Heh, Cacophony is too lazy to comment on all the parts she missed, though she did read ...

Alright, I finally caught up with this (Cacophony is way behind on her reading ;)). It's pretty good. Your world is interesting, and I like how you built up the ...

Oooh, this was good. Never read a vampire story before. Glad you liked it :D But I want more! I command thee to continue thy story! Don't worry. I will. ...

well, being one of realistic fiction and historical fiction, i thought the subject matter was rather remorseful--i dont usually read things like this. Well vampires aren't for everyone. I like ...

Nifty........ I usually don't read vampire stories but the title made me curious :D Anyway I really like it! I felt as if I was inside the vampire's head or ...

*drools* ooh vampires... Yeah vampires rule :D This reminds me a lot of an Ann Rice novel. Same ornate, formal language and faint dry wit in places. not terribly original, ...

I loved your writing.. i was totally engrossed and i think you should definetly continue it. I especially loved the phrase 'mortals seem to be dying to get in here.'..... ...

I moved this to Other, as it has an aspect of Horror to it... -Z Okay. I suppose it could probably fit in either one :D.

ohhhh... I like this! I love it how the vampire thinks. It would be a good story to continue! I presume the two people the vampire kills are the children ...

Also, when I got near the end of your story, there was "I'm not liking others to share my space"... 'Space' is a word that displaces the story. My term ...