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I hate fanfiction with a burning, fiery rage. It is the one thing I don't enjoy writing or reading. And so, I've decided that I will not deem this fanfiction, ...

I think this could be a short story- people are often too critical about defining what they are and aren't. Overall, this was written very well- not my favorite thing ...

Holy fu-cow. That was somewhat brilliant. Each description was perfectly thought out, and set the scene perfectly, a scene that we may have thought of before, but never with such ...

For a first try, this was really good. :) As you go into poetry-land (if you should decide to continue on that crooked path), you can start adding in some ...

Hi there :) So I just wanted to say- I thought this was really good. I think that every girl could relate to this piece in some way, and draw ...

This was an absolutely excellent piece- I love how you are able to convey so much imagery all at once. You are so concise- it's making me jealous :) Wonderful ...

Great piece- it really does remind me of Walt Whitman's work. :) The ending was superb, original and ironic in more ways than one. Really excellent write- I wasn't sure ...

This was extremely original, and had a completely different style than I'm used to. I adore it. No background is needed in any poetry, as well as you define the ...

I thought this was wonderful- you kept on switching who you were addressing it to, and the genders were a bit confusing at one point, but otherwise, this was human ...

This was an excellent chapter- the only thing I found was "psychic" was supposed to be "physique". Other than that, I think you have a very well balanced piece. I ...

This was another good chapter. I would recommend bringing anger into the equation from Liliah herself- I have a friend who was raped, and she was pissed off. REALLY pissed ...

Well, I'll second Dune and Kafka on the Shore. Also, all time favorite, The Name of the Wind by Patrick Rothfuss. Read it. It will change the way you write ...

This was another wonderfully written piece, as usual. Though I think Luke could have kicked Hunter a couple of times. Or at least hit him a bit more. No CC ...

Nice chapter, again. The bit with Hunter seemed kind of out of place to me though- it seemed completely out of character for him. They've been friends a lot time, ...

Loved the development in this one... it's gradual and realistic. I don't like Hunter anymore though. :c Anywho- another great chapter- I have nothing to complain about in this one. ...