BustedFlush

Any Bernard Cornwell or Patrick O'Brian book will be an excellent read

Americans could not live the same way without the immigrants. We depend on their low wages so we can profit more like we did with slaves. Mexicans are almost like ...

Not really but I was knocked out in the woods while skiing and had to find my way to a trail without any skis. I wrote it quickly I didn't ...

It was a very good story, but you left why the war was being fought.

She was on target on about everything. It would have been nice if you had not rushed the ending.

Thanks for the advice. I did my research now and I definately know what I did wrong. I have written another story kind of like this one. But this time ...

Thanks for comments. I didn't know much about how to write a conversation between two people. Now I know.

I liked the story. I dont't really know how the mechanics worked into it. Maybe it was about Mark being shot. Like what Mattie said you could have streatched the ...

Wow even though it did have some grammer mistakes I still enjoyed it. I understand though because I make alot of mistakes. I also liked the story because I can ...

Thanks for the advice. I am definitely not going to try that again.