Bunnykins

Depends what kind of mood im in, too what i think about poems. But yours i liked. I started reading it and thought, yer alot of repetition, not really liking ...

Im only new, so please lol be kind i only want to help hehe. feel his hand brush my cheek, I feel him coming closer, his nose grazing mine as ...

I agree, this is a good base that could be built upon. More about Shawn would be nice considering he seems to be a main character. And maybe the end ...