Bugslake

This is absolutely amazing and I wish that I could have written something like this. It is so precious and lovely, you portrayed everything so perfectly. It was almost like ...

I'm glad someone likes it

Hey this is my first poem. And I totally know what you mean. This will probably be my only poem. Not a poem person.

Thanks for the clarification. Really helped. Your welcome for the review.

Thanks I really appreciate the good ideas. The next few parts are mainly in Darius' point of view and I'll add more description to the characters.

Thnx for the review I really appreciate it and I will definitely take it into consideration. I'm glad you like my characters, I take a lot of time trying to ...

I totally understand. I have scenes that play out in my mind, but it's getting there that's the hard part.

I could tell it's your first. And just keep writing.

Yeah, I'm still trying to work out the kinks in it. I hav a hard time putting what I want to say in words. Thanks for your review, I'll take ...

Sorry it's actually chapt. 2 part 1

I mean it was hard for me to focus, not that it was torture. I am trying to learn other ways of writing and your chapt. Really helped open my ...

I know that's why I read it because its not something I would usually read. I really enjoyed reading it though.

Hi This is a kind of uninteresting topic you're writing about. I don't mean to be rude or anything, but this was hard for me to read from how realistic ...

Hey this is really good. Hope to hear more.

This is really good. I just wish that you hadn't been so predictable with the plot line. Even so, I still want to read on and I will since you ...