BugBoyAndy

Haha. Oh boy, don't be dreaming about it now, you hear? XD No but really, I think you're one of the book's biggest fans. :D

Wow, I was way off then. lol. Lucky you!

Haha. Gotta do better than that. XD I can read your mind though. *hummmmm* You are thinking... about, that it sucks winter break has ended.

Haha, good luck on that. I don't see why parents are cautious about online shopping anyway, PayPal is very safe. Oh yeah, there's more. But currently unpublished. Wait until you ...

Hey Scarecrow, awesome feedback. Much appreciated. I love how it interests you a lot. Every chapter ends with a cliffhanger, at least that's what I tried to do. (lol) As ...

Thanks for the read Luke! Every point of view is very appreciated. I iwll learn from it for my next book.

What I liked most about this poem, was that it's long. I don't like long poems, but I have a problem with making mine long. *chuckles* Make changes as you ...

In this part, you can understand she's angry, but you might want to say more on what she's thinking. It's not the best example, but you get the idea, right? ...

You know, before I go on this kinda reminded of Matilda. Not that I'm saying it's anything like it, it's just that previous reviewers are saying that the mother is ...

I liked it, but I think that the mother is a bit extreme. Let her show her hatred in more discreet ways, like I don't know, selling her belongings on ...

If you are going to continue to develop the mother's character and her relationship with the child in your storyline I suggest at least giving the reader a clue of ...

Sakura, Thank you so much for reading, and for the suggestions and critique. I am very open for comments, especially, most importantly, young readers. You spotted a typo, this is ...