BrumalHunter

Welcome back! 1.1 That's awesome! I wanted to create a Medieval feeling for the opening, even though it takes place in modern Egypt. I put a lot of effort into ...

Salutations! 1. Thanks for the praise! Descriptions with significant detail was one of the aspects I wanted to highlight in this short story, so I'm glad you enjoyed it. However, ...

For posterity: discussion continued in private. 1. The Sphinx wasn't supposed to be perceived as wealthy (ironically), but yes, I totally understand the warning. Thank you, by the way! I ...

Salutations! 1.1 Thanks! My intent with this short story was to employ long, detailed descriptions, so I'm delighted you enjoyed it. And haha, yeah, being interrupted when you're focused on ...

For posterity: discussion continued in private. 1.1 I'll add more details about the plane eventually. I've received this comment from everyone who's read it so far, so I'll definitely have ...

3. Oh, I feel stupid now. I can't believe I missed that. XD Come to think of it, leaving out things like gestures and resorting only to dialogue is a ...

Thanks for the review, Captain! Wow, it's been a long time I since Iooked at anything TAoDC related. I basically stopped writing for it after I dropped out of LMS ...

I'm glad the review was useful. ^_^

Yes, this definitely impresses the image of a girl doing a Genocide Run for her own amusement but not liking consequences. I agree with the review - a poem about ...

You're welcome!

You're welcome!

Thank you for the review, Buggie! (I could comment on this via IM, seeing as we're currently chatting in it and I just told you I started commenting, but this ...

You're most welcome!

You are most welcome! It took me a while to understand the rules regarding the use of semi-colons myself, so I am glad to provide some clarity on that topic. ...

Oh, so you are a fan! (Nice pun. XD) I haven't played PMD yet, but yes, I've heard that its plot is very well-developed. But I don't mind explaining at ...