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Re: Tristesse: Chapter 1 Friendship, oh holy sacrifice.. (Part I) EDITED
It is a pleasure to be of service.
Jul 27, 2014 -
Re: An Arrow's Flight - Chapter 1: Rebellion (I of VI)
It seems that this chapter is wanting, so I shall certainly be discussing this with my co-author; however, the action is there to gain the reader's attention, and I must ...
Jul 10, 2014 -
Re: Black and White
Oh, and I actually used three different types of narrator. First the omniscient narrator, then the direct observer, and finally the first person narrator. The first I used to provide ...
Jul 5, 2014 -
Re: Black and White
Oh, thank goodness! I realise the end may be slightly confusing, and I had hoped it wouldn't be too much so.
Jul 5, 2014 -
Re: Black and White
Thank you for your review; the points you indicated did help.
Jul 5, 2014 -
Re: Black and White
Thank you! I just want to make sure, but you do realise that Seth killed Ross, but then regretted it afterwards, don't you? I don't want the conclusion to be ...
Jul 5, 2014 -
Re: Rifted - Chapter IV - Sting Of Valor
And thank you for your regular correspondence (especially considering that "here" and "this" predicament); some people never reply to one's reviews, leaving one wondering whether it helped or not, but
Jul 4, 2014 -
Re: An Arrow's Flight - Chapter 1: Rebellion (II of VI)
Both your and Wolfie's reviews have left me blushing. When it comes to reviewing, I have learned that the two of you are not only loyal (I cannot stress how ...
Jun 30, 2014 -
Re: An Arrow's Flight - Chapter 1: Rebellion (II of VI)
I have read your review (as well as Wanderer's comment ;) ) and I thank you for the invaluable advice you have provided. I am glad you like Canis and ...
Jun 30, 2014 -
Re: An Arrow's Flight - Chapter 1: Rebellion (II of VI)
I shall certainly take what you have written into consideration. As for the fast pace, that was one of the things with which my co-author and struggled for quite some ...
Jun 30, 2014 -
Re: An Arrow's Flight - Chapter 1: Rebellion (II of VI)
Thank you for your support. Many more chapters will be published, so there will be no shortage of reading material. Would you like me to tag you upon the next ...
Jun 30, 2014 -
Re: The Siege, Chapter three: Summer Cottage
I am happy my review was of use to you.
Jun 30, 2014 -
Re: Corps of Recovery: Part 11
:$ I am so embarrassed... My apologies. That slipped my mind.
Jun 30, 2014 -
Re: An Arrow's Flight - Chapter 1: Rebellion (II of VI)
More pronunciations of potentially unusual names (the emphasised syllable is indicated by an apostrophe): o Canis : kay'-niss o Aleksandrei : ah-leck-zan'-dray Once again, if you have any questions co
Jun 28, 2014 -
Re: Rifted - Chapter III - First And Last
I cannot equal your response with one of my own, but I can say that I am immensely pleased you value my advice so much. You have made my day ...
Jun 25, 2014