BrumalHunter

I am delighted. :D 1. Oh, Malcolm definitely has a major role. ;) 2. You are right to be suspicious, but you will have to wait and see what happens... ...

You're welcome! (And I'm sorry for burning you. *smiles guiltily*)

Ah. That is good to know.

Oh, I understand. Dalton means "town near/in the valley", but I was referring to the Village part. Once I finish and publish chapter three, you'll see there are on average ...

Ah, that makes so much more sense. Thank you for the clarification.

Thank you for your review, Buggie! Firstly, I blame Tortwag for that pun. As for the typos, I shall go scan for them later. But I am glad you enjoyed ...

I know, since I've read all three first chapters last weekend already.

Aww! You know, you sound just like a mother who told her son that she's late for work and doesn't have the time to play. But I'm gonna beat you ...

There! It has been edited.

Thank you for your review, Ender. It has been quite useful. As for the suggestions, allow me to address them: ~ I am glad those differences are readily apparent. The ...

Wow, Silver... Thank you. When I published this chapter, I had not expected such a wonderful response, but I am certainly pleasantly surprised. As for those few problems, I shall ...

If she thought that then, she should see the reviews I write now... x_x I still believe you have the potential to be successful, Wolfie. (And wolf pups always look ...

How have I not responded to this? I - Impressions %u2660 My favourite Electric Pokemon are Manectric and Luxray, but they are also two of my very favourites. Their awesomeness ...

Well spoken.

Of course; just not her.