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  • Article / Essay » Politics, Culture Re: Locke and Rousseau: A Debate on Uncontacted Tribes

    Greetings, my name is James Hunt. I am surprised that I actually managed to follow Locke and Rousseau's debate. It was rather long and stretched out, but since scientists, scholars ...

    Apr 27, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Romantic Re: What If

    Salutations, once again. As you may have noticed, my earlier review was posted twice. Not wanting to be the author of spam, I decided to edit this, the more recently ...

    Apr 27, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Romantic Re: What If

    Salutations. My name is James Hunt and, as you might already have guessed, I am here to review your work. Let's get started, shall we? (Keep in mind that though ...

    Apr 27, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Ordadus- Chapter One

    Once again, I am impressed. Chapter One of Ordadus has been well worth the wait, but I am afraid the torture of waiting once more is now worse than it ...

    Apr 22, 2014
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Other Re: Watch Me.

    I really enjoy reading good poetry, and yours does not disappoint! Whereas unnecessary repetition can be quite annoying, the kind you implement is not at all redundant and succeeds in ...

    Apr 20, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Ordadus- The Prologue (OLD)

    This, my friend, is one of the best pieces of writing I have seen for quite some time. In fact, I regret ever reading it, for now it will be ...

    Apr 19, 2014
  • Lyrics » General, General Re: fiery love

    Sorry to disappoint you, but I don't think this would make a very good song. Firstly, I think your verses are too short. The first one, for example, is only ...

    Apr 17, 2014
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Other Re: Homeless God

    Writing a good short story is no mean feat; the length indicated in the name belies its true nature. In fact, for a short story to be considered "good", seven ...

    Mar 30, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Golden Bird, Red Fox: Chapter one

    Fantasy. I can spend hours living in one of my fantasy worlds, reading fantasy novels and even writing my own. It is therefore that I can think of nothing more ...

    Mar 30, 2014


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