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Re: Letter from a Lost Soldier
Salutations. What can I possibly say? I am astonished. I know not how old you are or even what your gender is - in fact, other than your username, I ...
May 31, 2014 -
Re: The Blood of the Martyrs- Chapter 2: The Encounter
Greetings, my friend. Thank you for the private message and the compliment you sent along with it, I do appreciate it. Alright then, on to Chapter Two of this bloody ...
May 31, 2014 -
Re: Hidden...
Greetings, young one. I see you have been a member of the Young Writers Society for but five days! Well, let me be one of the first to welcome you. ...
May 30, 2014 -
Re: How Does One Say Goodbye?
I am so sorry for your loss. Be not fooled, however, for you do not have my pity. No, you have my admiration. Many people would have despaired were they ...
May 18, 2014 -
Re: Terrible Maths
Greetings, once again. One of the things I love about poetry is that you never know exactly what to expect. If one were, for example, to judge this poem just ...
May 18, 2014 -
Re: Prologue
Greetings. At this point, it will be rather diffcult pointing out a mistake someone hasn't already flagged, so I shall simply add to those. It begins with the end, or ...
May 18, 2014 -
Re: The Guide to Being an Expert Gift Giver
Greetings. Firstly, I cannot believe your work has yet to receive even a single like. Fear not, for then I shall be the first. Still, your essay is inspiring, and ...
May 18, 2014 -
Re: Sight
Salutations. My name is James Hunt. Firstly, from what I can gather, this poem is about someone for whom you cared, but who recently ended your romantic relationship. If this ...
May 12, 2014 -
Re: Ordadus- Chapter Two
I must say, I am truly impressed. Never before have I read a work in this society that has so few errors. In fact, they are non-existent! I could find ...
May 6, 2014 -
Re: The Blood of the Martyrs Chapter 1
Salutations, my friend. I am glad to see the polar bear has finally emerged from his slumber. Whenever I review a new work, I read it through first, simply enjoying ...
May 1, 2014 -
Re: Life or Death ~Chapter 4- Infiltration
Greetings, James Hunt has returned for more. (Wow, it feels really strange to name yourself in the third person.) I shall now review your work. It is nothing something that ...
Apr 27, 2014 -
Re: Life or Death? Chapter 2- Preparations to Leave
Greetings. I have returned for the second installment of this book. I have already read through this chapter, and I find it a tad bit disappointing. It's not the end ...
Apr 27, 2014 -
Re: Life or Death? Chapter 1- How do I Overcome this Past?
James Hunt's the name, and I am pleased to make your acquaintance. I am an avid reader of fantasy novels, and though there are some excellent fantasy writers in the ...
Apr 27, 2014 -
Re: Power Surge- Chapter One of the Rift Series
Greetings. I am James Hunt, here to review your work. I apologise if this may seem rude, but at first glance, your work does not seem very sophisticated. Allow me ...
Apr 27, 2014 -
Re: A Dark Look at Crimea
James Hunt, pleased to meet your acquaintance. I always enjoy translating texts into English, but it is rather annoying when people translate incorrectly. Sometimes it's amusing though, as they can ...
Apr 27, 2014
