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Re: Ordadus- Chapter Four
Salutations, my dear friend. Chapter Four has arrived! And you need not worry about it taking so long; my own chapters are very far overdue. As for the review, you ...
Jun 15, 2014 -
Re: Golden Bird, Red Fox: Chapter six
Salutations. Finally, some action! I think Braxton is a fool for having refused the woman, though; he should simply have agreed and attempted to stay incognito. I suppose it is ...
Jun 14, 2014 -
Re: Golden Bird, Red Fox: Chapter five
Salutations. I now understand why Braxton dislikes his family so much; his younger brother is an egotist, his older brother is... uhm... my point exactly, his mother is indecisive and ...
Jun 13, 2014 -
Re: Golden Bird, Red Fox: Chapter four
Once again, I greet you. Thankfully, Braxton seems to be less spiteful now, but his younger brother is still as obnoxious, vainglorious and stubborn as ever. I am also happy ...
Jun 13, 2014 -
Re: Golden Bird, Red Fox: Chapter three
Salutations. This is another well-written chapter, but what I mostly do not understand, is why Braxton is so condescending towards the palace. It is his home after all, and if ...
Jun 12, 2014 -
Re: Golden Bird, Red Fox: Chapter two
Greetings, my fellow-tribute-but-not-for-much-longer-as-the-Games-are-at-an-end. I am certain I have reviewed this novel at least up to chapter four, but seeing as the website *shakes fist for dramati
Jun 11, 2014 -
Re: Life or Death? Chapter 5~ Untitled
I suppose I have returned for another review... Well, I certainly hope you have improved the quality of your writing, since your previous chapter left me wholly disappointed. “So tell ...
Jun 7, 2014 -
Re: Vryheidsoorloë-- The Freedom Wars
Greetings, young one who is interested in my home language. While I was scrolling through the latest of the YWS Hunger Games threads, I noticed an Afrikaans word amdist the ...
Jun 6, 2014 -
Re: Thunder and Ice
Greetings, my green-scaled friend. Once again, I have heard your call-to-arms and I shall do my best to ensure your survival! :smt027 Across the backs of the Alps ride I ...
Jun 6, 2014 -
Re: Life or Death? Chapter 3- Getting to know the victim?
My sincerest apologies for returning at so late a time. *bows head in shame* Anyhow, I have finally arrived and shall now proceed to review your chapter. Oh, the sights ...
Jun 4, 2014 -
Re: My Cornucopian Gift: Sonar
Salutations, my fiery friend. We tributes from District Two must watch out for one another, and so, I have heard and answered your call to arms! :smt027 That couldn’t have ...
Jun 2, 2014 -
Re: Memorial I: You Hold Their Memories
Salutations. Normally, I do not review poems, as I am not the best at analysing them and because they are so short - I specialise in spelling, grammar and vocabulary ...
Jun 2, 2014 -
Re: Start of the Hunger Games
Greetings, my friend. I had promised you that I would review your entry, and so, here I am. Glancing back up at the cornucopia, I final decided that I’ll take ...
Jun 2, 2014 -
Re: Ordadus- Chapter Three
Greetings, my friend. I realise this review is long overdue, but I am here to pay my debt. His steel blue irises were encircled with red and his cheeks were ...
Jun 2, 2014 -
Re: Thunderstorm
Greetings. I saw your plea for help with punctuation, so fear no more, for I have arrived. I shall even aid you in spelling and grammar, should those aspects of ...
May 31, 2014
