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BrumalHunter

The Astral Plane

  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Spiritual Re: Ordadus- Chapter Four

    Salutations, my dear friend. Chapter Four has arrived! And you need not worry about it taking so long; my own chapters are very far overdue. As for the review, you ...

    Jun 15, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Golden Bird, Red Fox: Chapter six

    Salutations. Finally, some action! I think Braxton is a fool for having refused the woman, though; he should simply have agreed and attempted to stay incognito. I suppose it is ...

    Jun 14, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Golden Bird, Red Fox: Chapter five

    Salutations. I now understand why Braxton dislikes his family so much; his younger brother is an egotist, his older brother is... uhm... my point exactly, his mother is indecisive and ...

    Jun 13, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Golden Bird, Red Fox: Chapter four

    Once again, I greet you. Thankfully, Braxton seems to be less spiteful now, but his younger brother is still as obnoxious, vainglorious and stubborn as ever. I am also happy ...

    Jun 13, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Golden Bird, Red Fox: Chapter three

    Salutations. This is another well-written chapter, but what I mostly do not understand, is why Braxton is so condescending towards the palace. It is his home after all, and if ...

    Jun 12, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Golden Bird, Red Fox: Chapter two

    Greetings, my fellow-tribute-but-not-for-much-longer-as-the-Games-are-at-an-end. I am certain I have reviewed this novel at least up to chapter four, but seeing as the website *shakes fist for dramati

    Jun 11, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Supernatural, Other Re: Life or Death? Chapter 5~ Untitled

    I suppose I have returned for another review... Well, I certainly hope you have improved the quality of your writing, since your previous chapter left me wholly disappointed. “So tell ...

    Jun 7, 2014
  • Poetry » Historical Fiction, Politics Re: Vryheidsoorloë-- The Freedom Wars

    Greetings, young one who is interested in my home language. While I was scrolling through the latest of the YWS Hunger Games threads, I noticed an Afrikaans word amdist the ...

    Jun 6, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Narrative Re: Thunder and Ice

    Greetings, my green-scaled friend. Once again, I have heard your call-to-arms and I shall do my best to ensure your survival! :smt027 Across the backs of the Alps ride I ...

    Jun 6, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Supernatural, Other Re: Life or Death? Chapter 3- Getting to know the victim?

    My sincerest apologies for returning at so late a time. *bows head in shame* Anyhow, I have finally arrived and shall now proceed to review your chapter. Oh, the sights ...

    Jun 4, 2014
  • Short Story » General, General Re: My Cornucopian Gift: Sonar

    Salutations, my fiery friend. We tributes from District Two must watch out for one another, and so, I have heard and answered your call to arms! :smt027 That couldn’t have ...

    Jun 2, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Memorial I: You Hold Their Memories

    Salutations. Normally, I do not review poems, as I am not the best at analysing them and because they are so short - I specialise in spelling, grammar and vocabulary ...

    Jun 2, 2014
  • Short Story » Fanfiction, General Re: Start of the Hunger Games

    Greetings, my friend. I had promised you that I would review your entry, and so, here I am. Glancing back up at the cornucopia, I final decided that I’ll take ...

    Jun 2, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Spiritual Re: Ordadus- Chapter Three

    Greetings, my friend. I realise this review is long overdue, but I am here to pay my debt. His steel blue irises were encircled with red and his cheeks were ...

    Jun 2, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Thunderstorm

    Greetings. I saw your plea for help with punctuation, so fear no more, for I have arrived. I shall even aid you in spelling and grammar, should those aspects of ...

    May 31, 2014


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