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Thanks everyone, for providing helpful feedback. This was a school essay and it goes to show I have room to improve on my writing, to say the least. I will ...

Thank you marmalade, I appreciate the feedback! You were very in-depth, and I will improve upon what I have so far, with your help. Have a good one.

Thanks bud! I appreciate all feedback.

Thank you very much for your input, I need to double check grammar:)

This is beautiful, truly a blessing of literature. I understand your questions, but I only understand them partly. This is a mystery, if I know any!

This story brought tears to my eyes. It was brilliant esse