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are we supposed to guess what book it comes from, or something? ???

very nice poem, and I'm proud to have voted the second option! One comment, the 'something clicked' seems slightly out of place...

nah, it's not bad but really it needs to be longer imo...

yeah that is the case, I'll have to use breaks next time! :D

wow that certainly is random. sounds like something I'd write about, if I felt random enough to put my thoughts down on LCD screen. Forget the pad...

somehow I don't think that I'll bother competing, that poem is kinda too good to compare with :wink:

I love the emotion in this poem. Even without actually seeing your grandfather, I feel almost like I've met him. Good Job! Perhaps a little more rhyme would have been ...

First two stanzas are simply fantastic, great imagery. Your language is quite picturesque! :D