Bromthebard

Wow, thank you katngo73. That is very helpful, check out my contest

Thank you all. By the way ziggiefred, the reason I dragged it out and made it lengthy was because I intended for the ending to piss most people off because ...

Thank you again. I will use these.

Thank you so much for the name alternatives.

Thank you, I got bored one day so I wrote that down, and I also made a character sheet for each of the main characters in the Dragon book, which ...

Thank you, I actually developed the story from a 2 hour story that one of my friends told me that had a similar ending, but it was one of those ...

I loved it! It had a lot of places where it brought back memories of me changing schools. I thought it was really good, keep writing. -Bromthebard

I like this, it is very, very random. Good idea though. Nice ending, killing the whale. -Bromthebard

This is really good. You should think about writing some more historical fiction. -Bromthebard

I thougnt it was really good, keep writing. :elephant:

This is your fellow New Age Inkling, This is really good. Keep working on it, and it will be a great book.

This is your fellow New Age Inkling, Being a band nerd I love it. Needs to be longer though. It also ends abruptly.