BrokenSkye

I really loved this poem! Great work! I don't see any errors really. We can dance into eternity darling But I have this impulse just to sing It doesn't seem ...

I like the way you wrote this poem. I think that it is simple and beautiful. I also like the way that you described exactly where the wishing well was. ...

First I would like to say that this poem was amazing. But the beginning confused me a little. I wasn't completely understanding where she was falling FROM. In the last ...

Okay first things first, I believe that this biography? I'm guessing. Has a lot of potential. And that you are a great writer and could become better just by reading ...

I loved this poem. It really spoke to me in a personal way. It inspired me to write my newest poem. Its called "If I Was Her?" It is my ...

Okay, first I would like to say that your poem was lovely my sister. But there are things that confused me. Like in your fourth stanza you said Then the ...

Okay, first off I would like to say that your main idea and situation of the story is brilliant! But, I would also like to say that there are a ...

Wow, it is a beautiful piece, I can say that much. But there are somethings that I would have to change if it was MY work. Like how in the ...

I loved this poem, and how you compared her to a flower and yourself (or the writer) to a stone. By saying She’s so beautiful, isn’t she? Bright blue eyes ...