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Re: 6000 Feet Until Deplanement
Is this for a play? Because I think it's pretty good :D Although I think maybe you can add a line where Felix says "if it wasn't for me, then ...
Nov 12, 2023 -
Re: The Civilian - The Government's perspective
Hi HB1103, Broady here with a short review! I'll firstly talk about the good stuff about this chapter, then I'll cover some possible areas of improvement and lastly wrap up ...
May 15, 2023 -
Re: Chapter 1
Hi DennisWolf, Broady here with a review! I'll first talk about the good stuff about this chapter, then I'll dive into some parts which I think could be improved and ...
May 15, 2023 -
Re: My Lover Chapter One: The Encounter
Hi wenxinqi, Broady here with a quick review! The story is absolutely beautiful! I like how you decided to use Chinese names and Chinese traditions (e.g. acupuncture) as a way ...
Aug 28, 2022 -
Re: May’s story
Hey Vampricone6783, Broady here with a review! Firstly, it's a pretty interesting story, and you have a really cool world right there! I'm interested to read more about it in ...
Aug 27, 2022 -
Re: ∞• KENDALL •∞
Hi there, Broady here with a quick review! First thing I noticed when I was reading this story was that it is way too long, especially for mobile users. Perhaps ...
Feb 6, 2022 -
Re: Lucifer-The misadventures of a man named Lucifer
Hi there vampricone6783, Broady here with a quick review! I guess the first thing that catches my attention the most is with regards to the spacing of the words after ...
Feb 6, 2022 -
Re: The CCP’s overseas pursuit and escape story: fabricated, framed, and arrested.
Hi annliyaa, Broady here with a short review! That's quite a mouthful to read, but overall I think it is pretty well-written, and very much resembles an opinion piece that ...
Oct 6, 2021 -
Re: Orion Legacy: Artemis (Chapter 1)
Hi there, Broady here with a short review! Firstly, that's quite an information overload there. I mean, yeah it's the first chapter of a sci-fi story but there seems to ...
Sep 10, 2021 -
Re: What Would You Do?
Hi OneMage Army, Broady here with a quick review. Firstly, just wanna say that this is a really interesting story. The story immediately begins in the introduction without any proper ...
Sep 8, 2021 -
Re: Lily (Part 1)
Hi LunaLovegood, Broady here with a short review! :D Firstly, the starting of the story was really good and smooth. Just by reading the first few paragraphs give us readers ...
Sep 8, 2021 -
Re: The Waiting Room
Hi RandomTalks, Broady here with a review! Firstly, I just want to say that this is a really detailed and descriptive short story which really brings the essence of the ...
Sep 8, 2021