BrittleBird

One small thing I would like to point out, right off the bat, is the lack of period at the very end of your poem. That felt strange to me, ...

Interesting poem! I would first like to point out the lack of reviews on your work, which I think is due to it's daunting length. Not to say long poems ...

I had to read this through a couple of times to follow anything... but that is not criticism! I personally love poems that are like a maze of words with ...