Brigitha

Maybe. :-)

Thank u so much, n yes I shall correct that now.

thank u so much, your review was greatly appreciated n also tld me the flaws in it, i would give my best the next tym. :-D

Not at all dude!!! :-P :-D

Your welcome buddy :-D!

Really enjoyed reading this poem. But i think this poem is actually the exact one of Author Frank Asch. It would have been good if you could have used the ...

Your short story really brought a smile on my face after days WritingWords.. It was so cute. Loved it.

Hmm... Thank you. Actually I got the same comments from my aunt too telling me to avoid sms language, anyways I will avoid it the next time.

Thank u so much for encouraging my work.. :-)

thank u so much.. this being the first poem I've written, I've made mistakes n would correct it in future.