Brian

I think that this poem is very cliche and relies too much on stock phrases. For instance, I've read the sixth stanza in so many variations before that it doesn't ...

I really liked this as well. The last line brings everything together really well, and the first and third stanzas are especially well done (the first stanza really grabs the ...

This is cliche, but that's going to happen no matter what when writing about Death. The subject has been done so many times that it's almost impossible to add anything ...

I have never ever been able to write a sonnet. I can do villanelles, sextets, limericks, and, of course, haikus, but I can't do sonnets. That said... I think you ...

Unsettling. I really liked this. The emotions conveyed are great, and you paint a picture that is disturbing yet revealing. Your characters are lively and seem almost real. However, it ...

A modest proposal? I don't think I'll be bathing in olive oil anytime soon, despite the varied points and benefits from it I have learned from your post. But it ...

Time travel has always intrigued me as well, and it is feasible to move forward through time if one could move at near lightspeed. Anyhow, I liked your story since ...

I really liked this. The dialogue is great and keeps moving the story forward. To add to that, you really bring the characters alive and you make what seems like ...

Like iced, I really enjoyed the extended metaphor of the seasons changing. The descriptions of the leaves changing and everything dying served to further impress upon me the notion of ...

It needs more depth. I really love your first paragraph, but it seems like you didn't pay as much attention to what came afterwards. It sounds very random and reads ...