Brea

This was really good. I thoroughly enjoyed reading it. Looking at my blade with disgust ; I shook it so that some of the blood dispatched and fell over his ...

My favourite books would have to be...Maximum Ride by (I can't really remember) :oops: So much for me being a die hard fan...and White Crane by Sandy Fussel. Well all ...

I do not think this is bad, though, I do think the grammar needs to be checked. You ignored Capital letter where they should have been, and placed way to ...

This is a very touching poem I must say. I think it's short, and even though most think because of a poems length it cannot get a message across (At ...