BraidenEllis

Keegan's "aftermath" was a followup on a big reveal in the previous chapter. Keegan's part felt a little flat to me (and I'm the wroter, woops). It was hard to ...

I believe in a God, yes, but I'm not very religious; that part there was more of a reference as to "All god's creations are beautiful" etc. etc.

You're welcome! I'm glad my review made you happy! :D

if you want to review my prologue to the other story I'm beginning to write (called "Falling For You"), you can view my portfolio and get to it lol. Your ...

Keegan is still able to maintain his grades because this is very rare that he is able to take these Xanax in such a large quantity, because he can only ...

I'll explain how he learned to hack later in the story! And Keegan is referring to his own mother in that point in the story. Thank you for reviewing!

Thanks for pointing it out so that I could make it more specific!

Thanks! Okay, so I wasn't attempting to make stereotypes; I actually have a bunch of friends who are cheerleaders! However, this is just part of what makes the story. To ...

I revised the things you pointed out!

(Psh Team Mystic and Instinct are kinda allied in the real Pokemon Go lol so no worries) Thanks for the pointers! I notice those annoying repetitions now that you've set ...

Heyo, Braiden here for a review on Review Day! Okay, this short story was so sweet, and I would SO love for it to be just a chapter in a ...

Thanks for the tips! I was typing really fast, so I knew there would most likely be some typos I overlooked. Also, the phrase "Leave well enough alone," means to ...

I guess just going from one line to the next. But it may have just been me

Any time!

Thank you!