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This reminds me of the movie "The book of eli" with Denzil (?) Washington. I thought this was pretty nice, although somehow, in some strange, inconceivable way, I felt that ...

I agree with Dragonet. That wasn't long at all! I breezed through it in four minutes :D I loved it. I sounded casual, and the conversations weren't at all forced. ...

That's a great story. I'd love for something after this. Even though, usually, I'm not a fan for the stories just talking about ordinary life, but this one is pretty ...

Maybe I'm a bit critical even though I just joined YWS, but I guess it's just the truth. Besides, you told us to take it apart. The "I'm late" part ...

That's pretty strong... and I completely agree. I couldn't find any errors to pick out, probably because there was none. :D And I really liked the setting and the POV ...

I like it! But to give some criticism, the part where you said "He had done this because The Finisher was curious as to how the festers made such an ...

I loved your story, and I love the conflict, emotions, and the pain at the end, especially the way you described the death. However, maybe your story was a little ...