BookWolf

Thank you for this review. :) And I'll take what you said into consideration when I update this later.

Totally! I actually already have the next part ready, I'm just waiting for this to get more views. :D

Thanks for this review, I appreciate the honesty. :) When I said 'Ivycove knew she should feel scared, at last nervous' I meant at least, just a typo. A few ...

A very touching poem. :D My favorite is the fifth stanza: And you'll have to excuse my typos Tablets are rude, that's what we all know. And you say you're ...

This is a great start! But I just thought I'd mention that a few of your sentences are quite short, and would look better if you just added commas. And ...

First of all, I found your writing quite interesting (In a good way). And second, the last sentence was just a complete winner for me. It was -- I thought ...