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Oh, sorry about that :oops: ...yeah, I'll put it in the Literary forum...thanks for reminding me!!!

Thanks Snoink :) Life's Meaning LIFE: Think about it for a moment. What does it mean to you? Does it mean family, friendships, goals, dreams...? To me, up until a ...

Thanks! :D Well....the story is a bit personal, and I'd like to protect the privacy of the person I wrote about....otherwise I would post it. I'll consider it.

Thanks, Tazy! I'm glad you like it :D

Thanks Brooke, I'll start working on it :D Thanks Tazy :) It was a very 'out of the blue' poem...

Very Elizabeth Barret Browning. :) Right....and who might she be? :? lol....I'll take it as a compliment though :wink:

Wow, interesting......I think this was very imaginative, and I like the elusive idea of describing someone with the wind and clouds. Awesome! :D

This is cool!!!! :D I'm intrigued about the letters :wink: I hope her Uncle learns his lesson! :P

So you want it to say: 'So when the time comes to reveal the truth, please be wise' ???

Thanks, Firestarter! Its just that I wanted to end on a more happy note with the last stanza, but I'll see what I can do....

Ditto to Dremi :) Nice poem, although there was some forced rhyming, but I think you got the idea across well. Good job

Would anyone mind commenting on this, please? :)

Thanks, Micah! :D The story is in the 1800's....not the 21st Century!!! lol...but I get what you mean...

Well, its not the actual home thats changed (well, it might have, I haven't seen it for a while), but there was a nice big swamp/billa on the property, and ...

I know that, Griffinkeeper, but Sonicroyal said he would use those spellings because the story is in an European country...