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Re: His eyes
I've read through this post and I've got some things I want to point out. First of all, I liked that you didn't describe Adam as physically perfect because that ...
Apr 26, 2016 -
Re: His eyes
I've read through this post and I've got some things I want to point out. First of all, I liked that you didn't describe Adam as physically perfect because that ...
Apr 26, 2016 -
Re: The Elfling - Prologue
It's off to an intense start. Great description, very graphic. However, I noticed a change in tense in the second line which had me confused for a moment. It feels ...
Apr 26, 2016 -
Re: 6. Tall Tales
I'd like to read the previous chapters, please do!
Apr 26, 2016