BoZi

hEHE... Thats my best friend lol... Good job mate Boziiii

Not much of a writer so cant relate very well, but this is absolutely well writen An enjoyable poem I do think that there is a bit of repetition here ...

Dude! Love the story, hmmmmmm AFBS Ill say no more. BoZiiiiiii! :wink:

Hehe buddy I dislike AFBS!! lol.... I agree with your point, however am very lost on how to rectify it. Will think it through... BoZiiiiiiiiii

Thanks

Toli, poetry isn't always about rhyme. Thanks anyhow, dude. Will try to rhyme more. P.s. I've edited it, as you suggested

Please write about Biology next. lol Really cool (because it's against Math), although its hard at first to see what you're talking about. Still, it's cool (because its against Math!)

Very nice. Love the imagery. Leaves you thinking.. Still think that the last line would be awsum if it rhymed, but i dont know much about poetry PS this is ...