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  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: Alice's Adventures in Zombieland

    I only just realised you posted that one in the wrong section :P I just reposted it here, so it's exactly the same as it was in 'Will Review For ...

    Sep 1, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Little Fleas

    Hi Twit! I'm here to review as requested on behalf of Ahmadblues' reviews--oh wait. I am Ahmadblues your piece :) (I think I should ditch the 'official' bit) Things I ...

    Sep 1, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Welfare babies.

    Hi! This is an interesting poem. It's... different. Things I liked cracked with age, withered with a strange hybrid of hope and disappointment, I loved this! HIV meds hide in ...

    Aug 28, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: The Beast

    Hi TheCodex, You've probably read, but you've also been randomly chosen xD Things I liked My feet pound the grass Ooh, that's a really good way to describe how you're ...

    Aug 28, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: The Vampire Upstairs

    Hi Tr3x! You probably read on the Shamrockers wall, but you were randomly chosen to have a review on your work... so here I am! Things I liked Apart from ...

    Aug 28, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Lets Invade...(insert country here)

    Hi CloudStepping! This is an interesting choice of topic for a poem. I think the topic has great potential because I've not seen many poems about this - but the ...

    Aug 28, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Chilled to the core

    Hi Unmarkedterritory! This was A.M.A.Z.I.N.G! I think you've got a great talent. I loved it all! Things I liked Well apart from everything... Raw. Paralyzed. Heaving. Wallowing. I loved these ...

    Aug 27, 2011
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: The Inbetween: Chapter One

    Hi Midnight! :) I liked this a lot too :) Nothing much happens but that's a good thing with the cliff hanger at the end. Why was Nora there? Don't ...

    Aug 21, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Here We Go *Edited*

    Hi Scarlett Fire :) I liked this poem. I liked it a lot. I don't know much about poems, but I'll say what I liked and what I think could ...

    Aug 20, 2011
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: The Inbetween: Prologue

    WOW. That was amazing, Midnight! I loved it! Some of my favourite bits: “Nora, you forgot your lunch!” The sharp voice floated down the street just before said teenager turned ...

    Aug 19, 2011
  • Article / Essay » General, General Re: *deleted*

    Hi 567ajt, If that was my mum's boyfriend, I'd do the same thing too. I doubt you're crazy or anything. Just try and calm down if you can (which if ...

    Aug 19, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Fanfiction, General Re: Can't You Help Me as I'm Starting to Burn?

    Hi Charllotte :) I really like this :D I loved everything. Not much to critique as it's pretty much amazing :D I can sense that there is something very sinister ...

    Aug 15, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Kill Her Swiftly Chapter 3 - I Am The Alpha

    Whoa... I can't believe Azrael actually did that! :O That's so... Wow. But that shows what Azrael is really like. It's obvious those years of abuse must've hurt so much. ...

    Aug 14, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: Love's Bullet chapter 1 part1

    Hi Vatten! :) Overall Overall, I enjoyed this very much. Learning that Chris (may I call him that? :) ) intrigued me, and it made some questions arise in my ...

    Aug 11, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: The She-King

    Hi Amelia :) I have to say, I love this, right from "She wore a beard upon her face" to "the image of a she-king". I loved the description. I ...

    Aug 9, 2011


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