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Re: Alice's Adventures in Zombieland
I only just realised you posted that one in the wrong section :P I just reposted it here, so it's exactly the same as it was in 'Will Review For ...
Sep 1, 2011 -
Re: Little Fleas
Hi Twit! I'm here to review as requested on behalf of Ahmadblues' reviews--oh wait. I am Ahmadblues your piece :) (I think I should ditch the 'official' bit) Things I ...
Sep 1, 2011 -
Re: Welfare babies.
Hi! This is an interesting poem. It's... different. Things I liked cracked with age, withered with a strange hybrid of hope and disappointment, I loved this! HIV meds hide in ...
Aug 28, 2011 -
Re: The Beast
Hi TheCodex, You've probably read, but you've also been randomly chosen xD Things I liked My feet pound the grass Ooh, that's a really good way to describe how you're ...
Aug 28, 2011 -
Re: The Vampire Upstairs
Hi Tr3x! You probably read on the Shamrockers wall, but you were randomly chosen to have a review on your work... so here I am! Things I liked Apart from ...
Aug 28, 2011 -
Re: Lets Invade...(insert country here)
Hi CloudStepping! This is an interesting choice of topic for a poem. I think the topic has great potential because I've not seen many poems about this - but the ...
Aug 28, 2011 -
Re: Chilled to the core
Hi Unmarkedterritory! This was A.M.A.Z.I.N.G! I think you've got a great talent. I loved it all! Things I liked Well apart from everything... Raw. Paralyzed. Heaving. Wallowing. I loved these ...
Aug 27, 2011 -
Re: The Inbetween: Chapter One
Hi Midnight! :) I liked this a lot too :) Nothing much happens but that's a good thing with the cliff hanger at the end. Why was Nora there? Don't ...
Aug 21, 2011 -
Re: Here We Go *Edited*
Hi Scarlett Fire :) I liked this poem. I liked it a lot. I don't know much about poems, but I'll say what I liked and what I think could ...
Aug 20, 2011 -
Re: The Inbetween: Prologue
WOW. That was amazing, Midnight! I loved it! Some of my favourite bits: “Nora, you forgot your lunch!” The sharp voice floated down the street just before said teenager turned ...
Aug 19, 2011 -
Re: *deleted*
Hi 567ajt, If that was my mum's boyfriend, I'd do the same thing too. I doubt you're crazy or anything. Just try and calm down if you can (which if ...
Aug 19, 2011 -
Re: Can't You Help Me as I'm Starting to Burn?
Hi Charllotte :) I really like this :D I loved everything. Not much to critique as it's pretty much amazing :D I can sense that there is something very sinister ...
Aug 15, 2011 -
Re: Kill Her Swiftly Chapter 3 - I Am The Alpha
Whoa... I can't believe Azrael actually did that! :O That's so... Wow. But that shows what Azrael is really like. It's obvious those years of abuse must've hurt so much. ...
Aug 14, 2011 -
Re: Love's Bullet chapter 1 part1
Hi Vatten! :) Overall Overall, I enjoyed this very much. Learning that Chris (may I call him that? :) ) intrigued me, and it made some questions arise in my ...
Aug 11, 2011 -
Re: The She-King
Hi Amelia :) I have to say, I love this, right from "She wore a beard upon her face" to "the image of a she-king". I loved the description. I ...
Aug 9, 2011
