Blues

Hi there, UpAndOut! I'm here as requested. I hope you had a great Christmas or Hannukah and a lovely new Year! :) My first impressions of this is that the ...

Hi there, Alfonso! I'm here as requested. Sorry this took a few days, Christmas, New Year's, y'know XD I hope you had a good new year. My first impressions - ...

Hi Blue! I'm here as requested. Happy New Year! I hope you had a good one. Sorry it took me a little while. This was a good chapter. We learnt ...

Hey there! I'm here as requested. (I'm sorry that this is a bit late - I had it saved but was unaware that I didn't post it yet!) Ooh, Music ...

Hey there, Sockmonkey! I'm here as requested. I hope you had a good Christmas/Hannukah/other celebration :) Allow me to jump straight in. My first impression was that the grammar issues ...

Jackster, twin! I'm so glad you're part of YWS :) I'm here to shred your work. What Went Well This has come such a long way. I'm so... proud? XD ...

Hi Adam! I'm here to give you a 'Blues Review! 8) XD Adam, I absolutely love your style. It's very unique and very very 'you' which I love about it. ...

Hi Jas! Wow! WWW This was a really good chapter! I'm glad you added Cassie. It added a new thing to the chapter. You did the emotion here really well, ...

CERAMICA. Hi! I'm here to review. I'll try to keep this one short :) This feels like a kid's story but twisted. I think that's a good thing, it had ...

Hi Jas! This chapter was pretty good. I can't fault it and I only have one critique! As Thatoddkid said, the pictures were such a great way introduce the memories. ...

Boo. I have arrived to do a review, JAG! Structure You actually had the courage to say you write? I've never! :P Anyway. Your intro was brief and short, but ...

Hi Jori! (What a fail of a portmanteau) I'm just gonna do a basic review and not bother splitting it up as it's going to be quite short: Comments This ...

Hai Angel! You need a nickname. I'm here to review your work! :) Well. I have no idea what the interpretation was, but I enjoyed it, nevertheless. There's obviously a ...

Hi Jas, Here as requested! It's been ages I've been saying that I wanna get to this, but NaNoWriMo, exams, life etc just got in the way. Thanks for asking ...

Wow O.O Can't say I've read something like this before XD My overall first impression is that it was interesting. I've never read anything exactly like this, so apologies if ...