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Re: monsters once known.
This was in fact a first chapter; I like to use YWS to get genuinely good feedback for things I'm tinkering with. And the dialogue feeling unnatural is probably the ...
Aug 2, 2025 -
Re: i hope i pass my ap exams
French Language and Cultures. The only reason you don't see people complain about how difficult it is is because you have to go through five years of French to even ...
May 13, 2024 -
Re: On the Overmorrow Chapter One- Three Perfect Strangers
Real quick (not your fault; I never specified gender), the red-eyed kid is Non-binary.
May 13, 2024 -
Re: Hysteria-- Chapter 1 pt 2
I loved this! My only complaint is the (lack of) paragraph breaks. I would suggest you run your chapters through Grammarly or something similar if you don't know where to ...
Apr 24, 2024