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Re: DIGITAL CORRECTION
I like this quite a bit! It's a really short poem, but it doesn't have to be any longer. So, my interpretation: The first stanza is about feeling like you ...
Jul 18, 2025 -
Re: Claudia helps Caden and Alanna pass on
This is pretty good! Even as someone without context of the rest of this collection, it makes sense to me in isolation. However, I think there are a few small ...
Jul 18, 2025 -
Re: I Don't Want to be perfectt....
This is a mostly solid poem! I have a few pieces of (hopefully constructive) criticism. First, you stick to AABB or ABAB stanzas with two exceptions. Your first is ABCD, ...
Dec 22, 2024 -
Re: Demon vs. A brand new world by Unique Arianna Gomez
"A demon’s powers cater to the imagination. Those with very strong ones, have an amazing time with their magic. Xavier is one of those demons. She’s used her powers for ...
May 17, 2024 -
Re: i hope i pass my ap exams
Well, this is relatable to say the least. "sweat rolls down my cheek like tears, but i’m not crying, i’m happy, i’m making tons and tons of money, but these ...
May 13, 2024 -
Re: Water Strider
Alright, your entry both has a lot of good, and some bad. First, the good: 1. The allusions flow naturally. 2. You characterize Adam and James well. I'm left with ...
Apr 25, 2024 -
Re: Hysteria--Chapter 1
All right, good set-up, but I have a few issues: 1. I feel like I just got slapped in the face with an infodump in the first paragraph. Given the ...
Apr 23, 2024