Bluegiraffe

Hi again, I am now reviewing your work with no sandwich. :( To start, I really like how you chose the main focus of this murderous, death like era. I ...

Hi, I am reviewing your writing as I eat a sandwich. I REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY loved the ending of this chapter. You have a really nice way with words. ...

I really like your repetitions and the short sentences, it gives the poem some life if you know what I mean. It is also really, really good how you included ...

You have a really good voice that you carried through when you wrote this. I really enjoyed the language you used and the sentence lengths that evoked mood and like ...