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Thank you for the review! I totally agree with what you said. I need to work on my writing and limiting my use of the word "and". I'm glad you ...

Thank you for your feedback! I totally agree with everything you've said that I need to work on--most of the time when I'm writing, I'm typing so fast that sometimes ...

Thank you for your feedback! And yes, I totally agree with you about the lack of the description with the setting. That's a part of my writing that I really ...

I exceedingly enjoyed this piece. I particularly liked the suspense of the story—waiting, waiting, waiting, then BOOM! It concluded just like that, making you want to hear what happens next. ...

This is really good! I highly enjoyed it. I like how it is sort of vague, but gives enough info so that you can understand what is going on. Write ...

I really enjoyed this poem. I especially liked the randomness of it, and the fact that it wasn't so serious. Normally when I read poems they're all dark and serious. ...