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  • Poetry » General, General Re: Things I Wish I Would've Told My Mom

    Yeah, I had a hard time categorizing this! Thank you so much for your feedback!

    Aug 19, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Turning upside down

    This is really nice. I don't personally understand it very well, but I'm sure you do. It feels like this is more of a poem written for the author not ...

    Aug 17, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Passed Around

    Beautiful! Short and sweet, but deep and packed with meaning. You aren't afraid to write about yourself. This poem is very well written,and I enjoyed it very much.

    Jun 7, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: You say, and I believe.

    This poem is great. It is stuffed tight with metaphors, but it still stays consistently realistic. You describe your heartbreak in such an open manner, and I am very impressed. ...

    Jun 7, 2014
  • Short Story » General, General Re: An ordinairy day with a roommate

    I loved it! your short story is well written and creative, even just for a story about mosquitoes. It flowed and read very well, while staying on topic and keeping ...

    Jun 7, 2014


For a short space of time I remained at the window watching the pallid lightnings that played above Mont Blanc and listening to the rushing of the Arve, which pursued its noise way beneath. The same lulling sounds acted as a lullaby to my too keen sensations; when I placed my head upon my pillow, sleep crept over me; I felt it as it came and blessed the giver of oblivion.
— Mary Shelley, Frankenstein