BlueJayWalker10

First off, thanks for this review! Yeah, I know I need to--wait. I described lots here. The table was mahogany. Visermann was drinking wine. His suit was a dark, saturaed ...

Hello there! First off, thank you for the review! I kinda left the creature's movements vague on purpose. I want you, the reader, to have the baseline for it, and ...

Yeah, I guess so haha.

You're welcome! It's a pleasure to assist wonderful stories. :D

Ah, it's okay. So I was right, you were from some other Eastern country in the general area. (Sorry if I seemed racist/like a jerk for choosing Britain or Australia)

Thank you for this wonderful review, Felistia! As for the "heart, might, mind and strength" I'm actually quoting scripture. Doctrine & Covenants 4: 2 "O ye that embark in the ...

Hello there! Jay here, come to review this as per your request. Sorry it took me so long! I had state testing and was a little caught up in everything. ...

Yo, Raindrop, is your profile picture Emo Levi from Attack on Titan/Shingeki no Kyojin?

Capitalizing "Mom" and "Dad" when you're using it as a proper name is grammatically correct. If you're saying "My mother", it should be lowercase, but if you're saying "Hey Dad!" ...

He wants to be reckless but holds himself back, because he knows his duties and place as a prince of Rhylath. I haven't given many pointers as to that fact, ...

That's why I almost called Edmond Lionel. But I didn't think that fit my calm, skilled, reckless prince who holds himself back.

When I think Lionel, I think happy, loyal, large. Dangerous when the people Lionel cares about are in danger. Well, like a lion. (The happy part probably comes from me. ...

Hello there, Meerkat! So I am sitting here, laughing my face off, because I didn't make a Black Butler reference--though I am a fan of it. ('Twas once my fifth ...

Oh my goodness. xD 1) Excellence in Writing was a nightmare for me for a long time! I was a third grader--and they expected a seventh grade level of skill ...

However, I did only give Phantom roughly two lines of clarity before confusing him with Richard. Perhaps I should change that, since Phantom is supposed to be the best-of-the-best-highly-sought-after-