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  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Words Written in Lightning: Chapter 6

    (Sorry for taking so long to respond, it's been a while since I've had the time to visit Young Writers.) My comment on (Or should I say: "Eight Years Ago?") ...

    Nov 3, 2017
  • Short Story » Realistic, Humor Re: Want to Write Grammatically Correct Dialogue?

    Yeah, I was debating on shortening the names to "Stew," "Gram," et cetera, but I decided against it, thinking if I abbreviated them I'd get rid of the joke.

    Apr 17, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Realistic Re: (Undecided) Chapter 1

    Oh, that's a gorgeous pronunciation. Really, you could pronounce that name in any fashion and it'd be gorgeous. And I'm happy to be of assistance!

    Mar 10, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Thunder and Ice Chapter 4 ~ Malanka's Training

    You're welcome! Glad I could help.

    Sep 27, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fanfiction, Teen Fiction Re: Gregor and the Bloodbath of Regalia: Chapter 2

    First off, thanks for the review! Aikido is a martial art that focuses a lot on controlling yourself and disabling your opponent without hurting them--and it's also based heavily on ...

    Sep 19, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Words Written in Lightning: Chapter 5 [Final Draft]

    Hey, thanks for the review! And the review on the sixth chapter of this story. Really man, I appreciate it. (And it makes me happy when my writing is interesting ...

    Sep 3, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Words Written in Lightning: Chapter 6

    Hey! First off, thanks for the review! So, it seems you're confused a bit about what is going on, no? There are a lot of things I'm not explaining in ...

    Sep 3, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fanfiction, Teen Fiction Re: Gregor and the Bloodbath of Regalia: Chapter 2

    Oh, and yes, the rats are larger than humans. In Susanne Collins's original Underland Chronicles (not my fanfic), the creatures in the Underland are hUMONGOUS. Cockroaches the size of a ...

    Aug 30, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fanfiction, Teen Fiction Re: Gregor and the Bloodbath of Regalia: Chapter 2

    Well, thanks! Your review made me smile. I was really able to tell you all that without it seeming awkward? I was just writing this in the assumption you've already ...

    Aug 30, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fanfiction, Teen Fiction Re: Gregor and the Bloodbath of Regalia: Chapter 2

    I'll be sure to, then. I'm happy you enjoy this! It's somewhat hard for me to write, actually, because I have to put so much time and thought into everything ...

    Aug 30, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Science Fiction Re: Northeast: Chapter 2 [Second Draft]

    Hey there, thanks for the review! Yeah, I know what happened when he mounted Blitz a second time was cool--but most of the time, Blitz will stay calm; since that's ...

    Aug 29, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Words Written in Lightning: Chapter 2

    Also, I just hired a friend of mine who is much more skilled than I am at drawing--so the crest changed, if you're interested in seeing it. It's just at ...

    Aug 23, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Words Written in Lightning: Chapter 2

    Whoop whoop! I'm glad to know you enjoyed this. This review might be what I needed, actually. Something always felt off about this chapter to me and I could never ...

    Aug 23, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Humor Re: Firelight Chat

    YUSSSS BRANDON SANDERSON IS MY ULTIMATE FAVORITE AUTHOR You caught my reference! Every single example I used was a reference to one of his series.

    Jul 14, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Humor Re: Firelight Chat

    Well, so far my brain has survived, so I think we're in the clear.

    Jul 14, 2016


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