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Re: A Peculiar Dream
Yeah I had a long discussion with my English teacher on breaking up paragraphs in fictional works. That should be improved in future writing. Glad it could emulate the bizarre ...
Apr 1, 2021 -
Re: Colour of life
I like the use of colors to emphasize certain words!
Apr 1, 2021 -
Re: A Peculiar Dream
Syntax and Format, gotcha. Happy to hear it managed to be surreal and abstract in the same way as a dream. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Apr 1, 2021 -
Re: A Peculiar Dream
Thanks! I'm glad that it was able to echo the surreal tone of any dream. I will work on formatting in future works as that is something I struggle with. ...
Apr 1, 2021 -
Re: The Old Willow
In previous works The Old Willow was referenced and I'm glad you expanded upon it. The science fiction-fantasy world you are quickly building is increasingly becoming more interesting with each ...
Mar 31, 2021
