BlueDaisy2018

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I really like this, especially the part where you say "a sharp remark on his tongue" and other ways you represent mundane activities in a less than mundane way a.k.a ...

hey! And you should check out my other poem: I am... a Dreamer!

it's okay. some constructive criticism is good. dont worry about it. ;)

I fixed the paragraph problem? Did it help at all?

Thank you so much. The character is in fact a she (btw). :) I really appreciate your review!!!!!!! Thanks!!!!

This piece isn't over yet. I'm definitely adding to it.

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sorry, it accidentally saved my message twice!!!

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Hey! This was a very good short story! I loved the good imagery and I felt like I could see what was going on first hand! The only thing I'm ...

Thanks for the review!!!! I had a reason for summarizing the piece. Becks was retelling the story on a recording to people she didn't exactly know, and she was ashamed ...

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I like this I really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really ...

Never waste your words I also like words My day was great! I'm a Sophmore in High School I'm 15 I have a grandpa who likes trains Trains are fascinating ...

Thank you so much for your detailed and heartfelt review! You seem to know a lot about writing yourself, and I hope to in the eminent future be caught up ...

Thank you for reviewing my poem!!!!! I really appreciate what you said and your--though somewhat brutal--honesty. Everything you said was right, though the swimming part was also a metaphor for ...

Thank you!!!!! That means a lot!!!!