Blossom

Hello, You provided an interesting perspective and I found it very captivating. The only thing I didn't really understand was the line: But I care but I will always care. ...

Hello! This poem is OK, but I just feel that you could have explored the emotions a bit more and added more to it. It was really quite simple and ...

Hi! This poem, in all it's heartbreak, really ins't that capitvating as your lack of poetic devices prevent you from exploring other amazing and gripping worlds apart from the cliche ...

Hi! I enjoyed the poem but I have to agree with Galerius on the point that you have sacrificed vital poetic devices such as imagery, metaphors and similes e.c.t, in ...

Loved the emotion and expression you used throughout the entire piece. Don't really have any advice because it all worked for me. I also loved how the tone changed in ...