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Re: 101 (Chapter 2)
I like the dialogue between Amata, and Jason. Personally I think the scene with the two at the beginning was in excellent taste. Like I said before sex scenes that ...
Feb 11, 2014 -
Re: 101 (chapter 1)
Good to see a Fallout fan fiction on the site. However there are still people who have not played the game. Maybe you could do a little more character development. ...
Feb 11, 2014 -
Re: The Dragon in my Dreams
"His voice was like brimstone and sulphur, like thunder and tremors. He spoke and the world obeyed." This was by far my favorite part in the story. The time you ...
Jan 23, 2014 -
Re: My Crazy Adventures- (M.C.A)Chapter 1: Pain is not just Mental
This was a good introduction to the character, and I would enjoy reading more of this. Why does the chapter end without her telling us how she met Sam? It ...
Jan 23, 2014 -
Re: Making The Grade Chapter 1
This is an amazing start to what I am sure will be a great series. I was a bit disappointed in the introduction of the antagonist, It seemed a bit ...
Jan 22, 2014 -
Re: Fences (prologue)
Personally I would love to read more of this. Another civil war in the US seems like an amazing story. You could have given us the name or gender of ...
Jan 22, 2014
