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Bloodvein11

  • Novel / Chapter » Fanfiction, Action / Adventure Re: 101 (Chapter 2)

    I like the dialogue between Amata, and Jason. Personally I think the scene with the two at the beginning was in excellent taste. Like I said before sex scenes that ...

    Feb 11, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fanfiction, Action / Adventure Re: 101 (chapter 1)

    Good to see a Fallout fan fiction on the site. However there are still people who have not played the game. Maybe you could do a little more character development. ...

    Feb 11, 2014
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: The Dragon in my Dreams

    "His voice was like brimstone and sulphur, like thunder and tremors. He spoke and the world obeyed." This was by far my favorite part in the story. The time you ...

    Jan 23, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Supernatural, Fanfiction Re: My Crazy Adventures- (M.C.A)Chapter 1: Pain is not just Mental

    This was a good introduction to the character, and I would enjoy reading more of this. Why does the chapter end without her telling us how she met Sam? It ...

    Jan 23, 2014
  • Short Story » Romantic, Dramatic Re: Making The Grade Chapter 1

    This is an amazing start to what I am sure will be a great series. I was a bit disappointed in the introduction of the antagonist, It seemed a bit ...

    Jan 22, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Action / Adventure Re: Fences (prologue)

    Personally I would love to read more of this. Another civil war in the US seems like an amazing story. You could have given us the name or gender of ...

    Jan 22, 2014


I love her dearly, but I can’t live with her for a day without feeling my whole life is wasting away.
— Miss Kenton, The Remains of the Day by Kazuo Ishiguro