Bloodsrain

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Thank you, I appreciate the criticism, its really what i'm here for. While the confusion part was a bit hard to understand, I clarified it a bit with changing it ...

Wow, thats...a really kinda dark story XD. I like it though, its deep, deep like the ocean. Iv'e been reading a lot of poetry on the site, and I see ...

Heh, thanks guys. I appreciate the reviewing, and, well, while you're right about the clicheness, don't worry, it'll be taking a drastic turn from this kind, almost like "Growing of ...

I like it, I kinda almost feel like its shaped in those poetrys that I used to read in English class. It's rather good, and rhymes with its self in ...