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Re: Lust : Chapter 10 : Goa
No problem! Can't wait to read more!
Mon Jul 02, 2018 1:39 pm - Re: Working with the Enemy ch2 Sun Jul 01, 2018 12:04 pm
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Re: Frost and Flame - continued
This is an interesting second chapter, and I love the anticipation and tension you build at the end. Just a few things I noticed: --"I wish I could fly," Ariel ...
Sun Jul 01, 2018 11:37 am - Re: Frost and Flame - continued Sun Jul 01, 2018 11:35 am