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Re: Frost and Flame - continued
This is an interesting second chapter, and I love the anticipation and tension you build at the end. Just a few things I noticed: --"I wish I could fly," Ariel ...
Jul 1, 2018 -
Re: Summer had just begun- A Reality tale
This is a nice chapter on the nature of young adult relationships. The tension at the end was kind of funny, and I'm sure many readers could relate. --"We're almost ...
Jul 1, 2018 -
Re: Pyromaniac - 3
Hi, Bloodlord here for a review! This is a great first few chapters, and it is interesting to hear the story from several very different personalities. Also, it is helpful ...
Jul 1, 2018